Friday, 29 January 2010

Writing 28.01.2010 (Bach)

Topic 1:

When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

Only hard working is not enough for succeed:

+ Lucky is necessary for grasp a opportunity

+ Intelligent is necessary for high efficient results

+ Support from other is necessary for solve a big problem

Essay:

Many people think that in order to succeed, only need hard working. In my opinion, hard working is necessary condition but not enough for succeed of people’ career. It also need lucky, intelligent, and support from other.

Firstly, lucky is necessary for grasp an opportunity. For example, in research, if only have hard working without lucky, research results can already published by other people or group. On the other hand, people are involved in fields that they are old-mode or can not put into reality. So hard working of people will become no longer value.

Secondly, intelligent is necessary for high efficient results. If only have hard working without intelligent, people can not reach to destination of plan before. If have not clear motivations, have not smart brain, people can not succeed, despite people are workaholic.

Thirdly, support from other is necessary for solve a big problem. If only have hard working without support from other, people can not succeed in order to a complex problem require various knowledge because people’s knowledge is limited.

In conclusion, I think hard working is not enough for succeed of people, it require many other aspect like lucky, intelligent and support from other. Only one of them is nothing, but combine of them are everything.

Topic 2:

Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one of kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

In Viet Nam, I think the rice is most important plant:

+ Main daily food

+ Provide significantly nutrition

+ Improve economy

Essay:

Have many kinds of plants that we all need in order to make food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. In Viet Nam, I think the rice is most important plant since it is main daily food, provide significantly nutrition, and improve economy.

Rice is main daily food in Viet Nam. Rice contains very big part of amount cultivation so it provides most of quantity food for Vietnamese. It is materials for many kinds of food such as cooking-rice, bread, noodle…

Rice provides significantly nutrition for us. As a cereal grain, rice is probably the most important grain with regards to human nutrition and caloric intake. With development of biotechnology, new types of rice with high quantity and quality of nutrients are expected mass production in the future.

Rice also improves economy for Viet Nam. As you know, Viet Nam is a developing country includes 80 percent of population are famers. Thus agricultural still have an important role in improvement economy of Viet Nam. Rice can be grown in different ecologies with low cost labor, so it can bring many incomes for us.

In short, rice is the most necessary plant, and we can say that rice is a symbol tradition in Viet Nam’s agricultural.

Thursday, 28 January 2010

Writing 28-01

Topic 1: When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position



Agree

+ a person who work hard has enough passion and will to succeed

+ if you don’t work hard, luck never comes to you



Someone think that people succeed because they are lucky. But in my opinion, hard working is the most important factor to lead someone to success. The reasons below will explain my position

Firstly, a person who works hard has enough passion and will to succeed. Everyone has an ambition. It depends on their passion. They will do anything, hard work to succeed in their field they chosen. For example, you want to become a successful doctor. You always try to study hard, practice as much as possible. If you want to become a singer, you have to sing a lot everywhere, everytime, even learn how to dance. Nobody says that you have to do that, but you still do it your best.

Secondly, is someone don’t work hard, luck never comes to him. In our lives, we meet many chances. If you good at a field, when opportunities come, you could bright. But if you have no ability, opportunities will come and go away. For example, Susan Boyle has a beautiful voice, she sings a lot, and after the Britain's Got Talent, all the world knows her. If she doesn’t like to sing, doesn’t practice in singing, can she bright as a star like that?

In sum, people couldn’t get success if they just believe in luck and don’t try to work hard. So that, we have to work to get our ambitious



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Topic 2: Plants can provide foods, shelter, clothing or medicine. What is one of kind of plants that is important to you or the people in your country?



Rice:

+ rice provides food

+ create jobs

+ economic benefit



Plants can provide foods, shelter, clothing or medicine. In my opinion, rice is one of the most important plants in our country because of some reasons below.

Firstly, rice provides food to people and animals. In Vietnam, rice is the mainly agricultural crops. Rice can not be lack of in a Vietnamese meal. People also can produce animal foods from rice, so many households raise pigs.

Secondly, over 70% population of VN live base on agriculture, a big amount of that plant rice, so it brings jobs for many people. Most farmers don’t know what to do if they stop planting rice. In the fact that area for agriculture is reducing, farmer have to be educated to become workers. It requires too much money.

Finally, exporting rice brings foreign money to our country. VN is the second largest rice exporter in the world and want to develop more and more, so the government always pay attention to grow this field.

Because of the reasons above, I think that rice is too useful and it is very important to the development of VN.

2010-01-22_Topic02_ThaiSon

Topic: Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine.What is one of kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country?Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

I think the plant that is important to people in my country, Vienam, is rice. I will explain in two following reasons.

– Rice is the main food in many meal of Vietnamese people.

– Vietnam is ranked second in the world in export rice, so rice is very important.

Essay:

Vietnam is still a developing country, with 80 percent of population is working in agricultural field. We grow many kinds of plants, but I think rice is the most important plant in Vietnam. My opinion will be analyzed as follows.

Firstly, rice is the main food in meals of Vietnamese people. We can eat bread, instant noodle, fast food or any others kinds of food but there are few Vietnamese people can eat them for a long time, we always want to eat rice because we like it, it the taste of us. Specially in the old people’s meal, they usually have rice although they don’t eat much.

Secondly, Vietnam is ranked the second in the world in rice export, after Thailand. The rice exporting contribute a big income in GDP of Vietnam. I can’t imagine that if we don’t cultivate rice any more, at that time what farmer will do to live. Vietnamese scientists is researching to find new rice type with high capacity, and we hope in the near future Vietnam will be ranked the first in rice exporting.

At last, I think that there are no plants can replace rice in Vietnam even now we have many plant kinds that have higher economic benefit than rice.

2010-01-22_Topic01_ThaiSon

Topic: When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

I disagree because of two reasons:

– We need to meet the right person who can lead you to the success.

– Somebody was born in rich family so they can spent a lot of money to learn, study or anything they want to know.

In conclusion, although luck is only occupy 1% in the success but we can say luck has nothing to do with success.

Essay:

We all know that without hard work, nobody can succeed, but in my opinion luck has a position in our success. Therefore, I disagree with the quotation: “Luck has nothing to do with success”. I will explain my idea in two following reasons.

First of all, sometimes we need go to the right place, to meet the right person that can understand what you are and can lead you to your success. For example, there is a boyband, they are really great, but nobody knows about them, until one day, the band’s leader save a … director in a car accident, and the director promise he will meet the band to hear they sing, after that everybody knows about them. If at that day, the band’s leader is not there, maybe they still are normal people that nobody knows.

Second, somebody was born in rich family, their parents have a lot of money and they can support everything for their children to get the success, such as: they can provide good food for their children, they can buy many modern equipments, they can hire good teacher, etc. So these children are born, grow in the good condition, if they also work hard, I am definitely sure that they can succeed easily.

In conclusion, I think that luck is one of small factors to obtain the success but it’s the factor that can be lack in the success.

Topic 1: When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position

Agree
+ a person who work hard has enough passion and will to succeed
+ if you don’t work hard, luck never comes to you

Someone think that people succeed because they are lucky. But in my opinion, hard working is the most important factor to lead someone to success. The reasons below will explain my position
Firstly, a person who works hard has enough passion and will to succeed. Everyone has an ambition. It depends on their passion. They will do anything, hard work to succeed in their field they chosen. For example, you want to become a successful doctor. You always try to study hard, practice as much as possible. If you want to become a singer, you have to sing a lot everywhere, everytime, even learn how to dance. Nobody says that you have to do that, but you still do it your best.
Secondly, is someone don’t work hard, luck never comes to him. In our lives, we meet many chances. If you good at a field, when opportunities come, you could bright. But if you have no ability, opportunities will come and go away. For example, Susan Boyle has a beautiful voice, she sings a lot, and after the Britain's Got Talent, all the world knows her. If she doesn’t like to sing, doesn’t practice in singing, can she bright as a star like that?
In sum, people couldn’t get success if they just believe in luck and don’t try to work hard. So that, we have to work to get our ambitious

____________
Topic 2: Plants can provide foods, shelter, clothing or medicine. What is one of kind of plants that is important to you or the people in your country?

Rice:
+ rice provides food
+ create jobs
+ economic benefit

Plants can provide foods, shelter, clothing or medicine. In my opinion, rice is one of the most important plants in our country because of some reasons below.
Firstly, rice provides food to people and animals. In Vietnam, rice is the mainly agricultural crops. Rice can not be lack of in a Vietnamese meal. People also can produce animal foods from rice, so many households raise pigs.
Secondly, over 70% population of VN live base on agriculture, a big amount of that plant rice, so it brings jobs for many people. Most farmers don’t know what to do if they stop planting rice. In the fact that area for agriculture is reducing, farmer have to be educated to become workers. It requires too much money.
Finally, exporting rice brings foreign money to our country. VN is the second largest rice exporter in the world and want to develop more and more, so the government always pay attention to grow this field.
Because of the reasons above, I think that rice is too useful and it is very important to the development of VN.

Hard work & Luck, Important Plant

.Writing :

1) When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do
with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use the
specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline :

What success mean? Success in what?

Success is creating what you want the way you want it to be.?

Success is a continuous learning of strategy?

"Success is the completion of anything intended."?

Xin nợ bài này ^^ (Do chưa định nghĩa được thế nào là thành công.)

A>Hard work :

-Pass college entrance

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B>Luck

-Meet some-one



2) Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine.What is one of
kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country?Use the
specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline :

The most important plant to me or the people in our country : Rice plant.

Why?

-supply food for people (all vietnameses eate rice or food was made from rice)

-family economic (famers grow rice to earn mony for living)

-nation economic (vietnamese is the third-largest rice exporting contry [2008], after Thai Lan?)

http://internationaltradecommodities.suite101.com/article.cfm/leading_rice_export_countries [source]


Hiện tại mình mới chỉ out-line thôi, mọi người cứ cho nhận xét về idiom cũng được nhé.


Luck and Plant_Hang_28.1.2010

Topic 1: “When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

I. Introduction
- Giving the own idea: not integrally/ absolutely agree with this idea.

II. Body
1. Inventions and discoveries by accident
- Columbus
- Newton

2. Luck helps to work harder to have success

III. Conclusion
Confirm and assert the idea.

Essay:

Some people say that “when people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” I do not integrally/ absolutely agree with this idea.

Nobody can deny that there is a close connection between success and hard work but I do not agree with the quotation that luck has nothing to do with success. Moreover, luck can help you work harder for the two reasons below.

Firstly, they are stories of luck. There were a lot of great inventions and discoveries that came by accident. One of the luckiest things in history is the discovery of Amerca. Columbus who found America on the way looking for India enriched his sponsors and changed history. Other story is Isaac Newton, a scientist who invented the law of universal gravitation with an apple falling onto his head. Personally, I think if there had not been these things, how we could have such great inventions nowadays.

Secondly, when people work hard, they have knowledge and experience. However, they will not succedd if there is no luck brings them to the right place to meet right people that help them can use their knowledge in an effective way. In addition, with the good beginning, people will be more hardworking to gain more success.

In conclusion, I think that nothing can replace hard work, but working hard does not mean that people are preparing themselves opportunity. Opportunity often depends on luck, they are hand in hand.

Topic 2. Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plan that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

Outline:

I. Introduction
- Giving the name of the most important plant: rice
- Tell abit about ideas that will support for author’s ideas

II. Body

1. Rice is the main food
2. Rice brings money by being exported

III. Conclusion
Confirm and assert the idea.

Essay:

Vietnam is one of tropical countries with warm, rainy and wet climate. It is the best enviroment for many kinds of plant to develop. From the beginning of human beings, the ancient of Vietnamese people knew to plant rice for food. Rice is quite suitable when tobe planted in Vietnamese climate so I would choose it for the most important plant in Vietnam. Rice not only is the main food but also contributes a great deal to the country’s economic and helps to promote other industries.

If people have time to go to Vietnamese’s countries, they can see hundreds of mile with rice and paddies like a green carpet. For thousand years, Vietnamese people feed themselves mostly from these fields. If people have chance to have a normal meal with Vietnamese’s family they can see that rice is the main food. People can eat everything but nothing can be eaten as much as rice.

Besides feeding themselves, Vietnamese manage to grow enough rice tobe the world’s second largest rice exporter, after Thailand. Exporting rice is an important part in the country’s economy. Having more money in turn will help develop other indutries.

With all the reasons above, I definitely believe that no other plant can relace rice in Vietnamese people’s life and economy.

Wednesday, 27 January 2010

Writing assignment

Topic 1: When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

Disagree.

Reason 1:

- luckily born in rich and powerful power

- conception of society that you are living in => luckily to live right times

- luckily to act right => meet a chain of opportunities.


 All people experience success and failure in their life. So what factors affect success? Some people think that hard working play the most important role in success, and luck has nothing to do with it. However, I do not agree with this statement, for some following reasons.
 People who are born in rich, powerful families have a very good chance of their life. They can access the best education, the best condition … that lead to their success. Bill Gates, for example, was born in a family with possibilities that could afford to send him to a private school, which has one of the first computer in United States. If he couldn’t stuck with computers, would there Bill Gates that we know today ? This is just pure luck, not about hard work. Being born in such a family like that, people can be success even without working particularly hard.
 Another important factor, it’s the conception of the society. In ancient time, successful people could be a great warrior. However, modern time considers successful people to be someone who have great career, a lot of money… In some times you can become great, but, in some times you’re just a normal person. So that, luckily being born in right ages can also lead to success.
 Finally, as a philosopher said, success bases on a chain of accidental decisions. Some people succeed because they meet a chain of opportunities. That can be made by hardworking. 
 In conclusion, both hard work and luck are important to one’s success. To be successful, you can not lack one of them.
 

Topic 2: Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one of kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

The most important plant to me is Rice.

Reasons:

- supply the main food for the country

- Economics role

-Personal impression.

 Plants play a very important role in human’s life for a long time. Viet Nam is an agricultural country , so that the position of plant is much more special. In my opinion, Rice is the one that so important to me or the people in my country, for some following reasons.
 First of all, Rice supply the main food in my country. Most of Vietnamese are made from rice such as Pho, noodle, many kind of cakes . . . They appear in our usual daily meal. And all of them taste very well. 
 Secondly,as Viet Nam has been the world's second largest rice exporter since the mid-1990s,exporting rice is bringing much foreign currency. Viet Nam is a country that 80% population work as farmer, and most of them plant this kind of plant. So that, to the farmer, rice is their means of subsistence. That’s why there is an image of rice on the VN national emblem.
 Finally, my grandparents are farmer, so, I grew up with the rice field. I still remember very well when standing next to the huge field filled with the smell of rice, the colour of yellow. That scene can make you relax, and soothe all the tiredness. I also remember the nights when all family gathered together boiling Banh Chung, a traditional dish we usually make for Tet holiday. We all stayed awake until middle night, to welcome New Year’s Eve. It’s really warm and happy time.
 In conclusion, Rice is a plant that affects greatly to people in my country not only because it’s the main source of food supply. This plant is important to me as well, and I have a special love for it. 
 

Mục lục Writing Topic

2010-01-15
T01 - What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why
is this room more important to you than any room? Use specific reasons
anh examples to support your opinion?


T02 - The twenthieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is
one change that should be remembered about the twenthieth century? Use
specific reasons anh examples to support your opinion?