Topic: When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Outline:
I disagree because of two reasons:
– We need to meet the right person who can lead you to the success.
– Somebody was born in rich family so they can spent a lot of money to learn, study or anything they want to know.
In conclusion, although luck is only occupy 1% in the success but we can say luck has nothing to do with success.
Essay:
We all know that without hard work, nobody can succeed, but in my opinion luck has a position in our success. Therefore, I disagree with the quotation: “Luck has nothing to do with success”. I will explain my idea in two following reasons.
First of all, sometimes we need go to the right place, to meet the right person that can understand what you are and can lead you to your success. For example, there is a boyband, they are really great, but nobody knows about them, until one day, the band’s leader save a … director in a car accident, and the director promise he will meet the band to hear they sing, after that everybody knows about them. If at that day, the band’s leader is not there, maybe they still are normal people that nobody knows.
Second, somebody was born in rich family, their parents have a lot of money and they can support everything for their children to get the success, such as: they can provide good food for their children, they can buy many modern equipments, they can hire good teacher, etc. So these children are born, grow in the good condition, if they also work hard, I am definitely sure that they can succeed easily.
In conclusion, I think that luck is one of small factors to obtain the success but it’s the factor that can be lack in the success.
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