Friday, 29 January 2010

Writing 28.01.2010 (Bach)

Topic 1:

When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

Only hard working is not enough for succeed:

+ Lucky is necessary for grasp a opportunity

+ Intelligent is necessary for high efficient results

+ Support from other is necessary for solve a big problem

Essay:

Many people think that in order to succeed, only need hard working. In my opinion, hard working is necessary condition but not enough for succeed of people’ career. It also need lucky, intelligent, and support from other.

Firstly, lucky is necessary for grasp an opportunity. For example, in research, if only have hard working without lucky, research results can already published by other people or group. On the other hand, people are involved in fields that they are old-mode or can not put into reality. So hard working of people will become no longer value.

Secondly, intelligent is necessary for high efficient results. If only have hard working without intelligent, people can not reach to destination of plan before. If have not clear motivations, have not smart brain, people can not succeed, despite people are workaholic.

Thirdly, support from other is necessary for solve a big problem. If only have hard working without support from other, people can not succeed in order to a complex problem require various knowledge because people’s knowledge is limited.

In conclusion, I think hard working is not enough for succeed of people, it require many other aspect like lucky, intelligent and support from other. Only one of them is nothing, but combine of them are everything.

Topic 2:

Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one of kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Outline:

In Viet Nam, I think the rice is most important plant:

+ Main daily food

+ Provide significantly nutrition

+ Improve economy

Essay:

Have many kinds of plants that we all need in order to make food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. In Viet Nam, I think the rice is most important plant since it is main daily food, provide significantly nutrition, and improve economy.

Rice is main daily food in Viet Nam. Rice contains very big part of amount cultivation so it provides most of quantity food for Vietnamese. It is materials for many kinds of food such as cooking-rice, bread, noodle…

Rice provides significantly nutrition for us. As a cereal grain, rice is probably the most important grain with regards to human nutrition and caloric intake. With development of biotechnology, new types of rice with high quantity and quality of nutrients are expected mass production in the future.

Rice also improves economy for Viet Nam. As you know, Viet Nam is a developing country includes 80 percent of population are famers. Thus agricultural still have an important role in improvement economy of Viet Nam. Rice can be grown in different ecologies with low cost labor, so it can bring many incomes for us.

In short, rice is the most necessary plant, and we can say that rice is a symbol tradition in Viet Nam’s agricultural.

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